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February 5, 2009 at 7:20 pm |
Um. It’s a good story in a way but you really haven’t shown it… Don’t we need to see the woman’s tension in some way ahead of time… perhaps the woman w/ the drunken husband needs to say something that will get a rise out of the secret keeper…
Why are both women ‘enabling’ their husbands. Why both so passive? Don’t women stand up for themselves in this culture?
Anyway, at least the dictum, ’show don’t tell’ might be helpful in having us connect directly…
learning, that’s where it’s at… I hope… for me too…